So What.... does that second paragraph say?

From the discussion I figured that the biggest part that would help would be the So What? I believe that people need to write things that have a reason. It's pointless and a waste of time to write or read something that doesn't have a reason to it. Why even read it? It's not worth it.

Another was the problem-solution essay. I think it's very important to have straight facts that are also in depth when talking about a topic. I think that if you leave stuff out of a paper or a discussion, it will significantly hurt the attempt to get the point across. if you give a bland answer it will be hard to write about.

Okay, so the last paragraph probably doesn't make a lot of sense but i hope you get what im trying to say. But anyway, anther point is to have 3 or 4 sides of view for one topic. If you think about how you see the issue, how they see the issue, how people are for/against the issue could really help the essay or discussion.